Come Dream with Me ~ a rondeau

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Stella
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Come Dream with Me ~ a rondeau

Postby Stella » Sat Jun 27, 2015 10:52 pm





Come dream with me ‘neath ardent skies
serene and graceful close your eyes,
dream on a special sapphire star
i see one watching from afar
he charms the night and mystifies

when we awaken at sunrise
perhaps our love we should disguise
and keep to us this sweet boudoir,
come dream with me.

The heavens whisper wistful sighs
so sweet, but soon the dawn will rise
and our embrace will seem so far,
but this is only “Au revoir”
My plea each night as twilight dies,
"Come dream with me"



© Stella Armour 25-06-2015

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Re: Come Dream with Me ~ a rondeau

Postby Karin Anderson » Mon Jun 29, 2015 12:52 pm

You have chosen the perfect glorious video to go with your dreamy rondeau poem. I love the repetition of the refrain and it is wonderful how you are writing more forms now, and perhaps some other poets would enjoy writing one too! My head is full of beautiful dreams now thank you Stella.

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Re: Come Dream with Me ~ a rondeau

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Tue Jun 30, 2015 1:40 am

It has a magical flow in in Stella, thanks for this beautiful write. W

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Re: Come Dream with Me ~ a rondeau

Postby SyberRose » Tue Jun 30, 2015 12:07 pm

You have outdone yourself with this spectacular rendering of romance. I loved the video and your lovely signature style.
Beautifully done dear...hugs
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Re: Come Dream with Me ~ a rondeau

Postby Nightmute » Tue Jun 30, 2015 11:24 pm

It is a musical form used to capture the magic you've produced in this stunning verse, Stella.


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