An Ache Too Deep to Fathom

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Nightmute
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An Ache Too Deep to Fathom

Postby Nightmute » Tue Jun 30, 2015 11:34 pm

Dramamine to help relieve
the sickness I've endured.
My broken heart was just the start
of this illness I've procured.

Skewered, yes, and nothing less
than what you planned, I fear.
With my stomach knotted, my love's allotted
to the nothingness of your sneer.

Help me if you think you can,
or leave me by the roadside, dead.
"It's all the same," - my mantra, mumbled.
Never again; my heart's been bled.


"It's all the same," is all that's said.

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Re: An Ache Too Deep to Fathom

Postby Stella » Wed Jul 01, 2015 2:19 pm

Dramamine.. i had to look it up Richard and it hasn't helped your sickness, a wonderful metaphor you have used.

What a dreadful ache you have, love is like that sometimes..it hurts and "never again" becomes the mantra . :(

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Re: An Ache Too Deep to Fathom

Postby SyberRose » Wed Jul 01, 2015 3:22 pm

Nothing worse then a broken heart...It steals your soul..life has many agonies...a poignant write...Rose
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Re: An Ache Too Deep to Fathom

Postby Cindy » Thu Jul 02, 2015 2:30 pm

A very moving poem. Perfect words to describe a broken heart.

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Re: An Ache Too Deep to Fathom

Postby Fay Slimm » Mon Jul 06, 2015 7:00 pm

A sad and moving poem dear Richard - - hearts that get broken are ever too painful to fathom. Much to think on in this powerful verse.

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Re: An Ache Too Deep to Fathom

Postby stevenstirk » Thu Jul 09, 2015 9:34 am

A poignant piece in which the loss is keenly felt. There is such grief
and sadness within your words.


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