Meadow Flowers

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Tom Balch
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Meadow Flowers

Postby Tom Balch » Thu Nov 06, 2014 8:23 pm

They wheel her out onto the terrace
to feel the sun and breath fresh air,
wrapped up in blankets just in case
and after only a few moments the
sun upon her face warm and sweet
lets her drift and fall to sleep.

Dreams of childhood come to fore
the buttercup and daisy games,
yellow circles under children's chins
longest chain of daisy's ever seen,
the meadow flowers small and bright
lead her gently to the light...

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Stella
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Re: Meadow Flowers

Postby Stella » Thu Nov 06, 2014 10:05 pm

Very soft and beautiful Tom, a gentle passing back home through the meadows of her childhood.

Welcome to our new site my friend, i hope you will find it a pleasant place to be..

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Lynda Robson
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Re: Meadow Flowers

Postby Lynda Robson » Fri Nov 07, 2014 11:56 am

This is poignant and beautifuuly written Tom

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chaos1214
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Re: Meadow Flowers

Postby chaos1214 » Fri Nov 07, 2014 4:46 pm

A touching sigh of a poem illustrating an instant of gentle, yet transcendent, transition.

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Cindy
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Re: Meadow Flowers

Postby Cindy » Fri Nov 07, 2014 7:15 pm

This feels very peaceful. May we all dream such beautiful dreams.

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Karin Anderson
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Re: Meadow Flowers

Postby Karin Anderson » Sat Nov 08, 2014 5:14 am

Tears came to my eyes when I reached the second stanza as I love buttercups and daisy chains. The tenderness
you show really touches my soul, and is bittersweet with the life that has ceased to be, yet sweet with the beauty
of your words Tom.

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Re: Meadow Flowers

Postby Fay Slimm » Sat Nov 08, 2014 8:15 am

The scene your pen paints in this touching poem will stay long after the read Tom - - a guide into light by daisies - a stunning image ant thank you for posting - -welcome too to this friendly site Tom - so pleased to see you have joined JustForYou Poetry.


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