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Like Flowers ~ a haibun
Posted: Sun Aug 02, 2015 10:54 pm
by Stella
My soul heard you singing in another time, another life and the colours you sang were
so beautiful that my tears bled into
rainbows as a butterfly
kissed my hand.
Like flowers
beautiful souls
are re-born
© Stella Armour 2015
Re: Like Flowers ~ a prose poem
Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2015 5:45 am
by Sandra Martyres
Very beautifully expressed Stella"
Re: Like Flowers ~ a haibun
Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2015 5:27 pm
by Cindy
Very beautiful. I love the phrase, "tears bled into rainbows" - lovely thought.
Re: Like Flowers ~ a haibun
Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2015 9:26 pm
by Fay Slimm
A heart-touching array of beautiful words Stella and with such inspiring imagery.
Re: Like Flowers ~ a haibun
Posted: Wed Aug 05, 2015 3:08 am
by Karin Anderson
To sing colours is a unique and romantic way to express eternal love and beauty. A wonderful haibun thank you Stella.
Re: Like Flowers ~ a haibun
Posted: Wed Aug 05, 2015 7:53 pm
by Stella
Thank you everyone for your kind comments...
Re: Like Flowers ~ a haibun
Posted: Fri Aug 07, 2015 11:56 am
by Tom Balch
This is so beautiful, Stella. Must look up this form myself.
Re: Like Flowers ~ a haibun
Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2015 6:07 pm
by Ratliff
A masterpiece Bravo bravo
Re: Like Flowers ~ a haibun
Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2015 11:13 pm
by drllrd74
Wonderful.
Re: Like Flowers ~ a haibun
Posted: Tue Sep 08, 2015 8:01 pm
by Cindy
This is very beautiful. I actually wish to write a haibun one day. I think it's a fascinating form.