Like Flowers ~ a haibun

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Stella
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Like Flowers ~ a haibun

Postby Stella » Sun Aug 02, 2015 10:54 pm

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My soul heard you singing in another time, another life and the colours you sang were
so beautiful that my tears bled into
rainbows as a butterfly
kissed my hand.


Like flowers
beautiful souls
are re-born


© Stella Armour 2015

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Re: Like Flowers ~ a prose poem

Postby Sandra Martyres » Tue Aug 04, 2015 5:45 am

Very beautifully expressed Stella"

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Re: Like Flowers ~ a haibun

Postby Cindy » Tue Aug 04, 2015 5:27 pm

Very beautiful. I love the phrase, "tears bled into rainbows" - lovely thought.

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Re: Like Flowers ~ a haibun

Postby Fay Slimm » Tue Aug 04, 2015 9:26 pm

A heart-touching array of beautiful words Stella and with such inspiring imagery.

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Re: Like Flowers ~ a haibun

Postby Karin Anderson » Wed Aug 05, 2015 3:08 am

To sing colours is a unique and romantic way to express eternal love and beauty. A wonderful haibun thank you Stella.

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Re: Like Flowers ~ a haibun

Postby Stella » Wed Aug 05, 2015 7:53 pm

Thank you everyone for your kind comments... :)

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Re: Like Flowers ~ a haibun

Postby Tom Balch » Fri Aug 07, 2015 11:56 am

This is so beautiful, Stella. Must look up this form myself.

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Re: Like Flowers ~ a haibun

Postby Ratliff » Sat Sep 05, 2015 6:07 pm

A masterpiece Bravo bravo

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Re: Like Flowers ~ a haibun

Postby drllrd74 » Sat Sep 05, 2015 11:13 pm

Wonderful.

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Re: Like Flowers ~ a haibun

Postby Cindy » Tue Sep 08, 2015 8:01 pm

This is very beautiful. I actually wish to write a haibun one day. I think it's a fascinating form.


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