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Love is offered up...

Posted: Sun Aug 23, 2015 3:56 am
by drllrd74
Here's a poem for you,
please take it for your own;
meant to offer happiness,
in whatever manner shown.

Offered up in hope,
that it's received in love;
in the form of joy,
by a small, white dove.

Music to the ear,
a song for only you;
to brighten up your day,
for what we've all been through.

For trials and tests and sorrow,
for the times we had to cry;
when the road was bumpy,
when we thought we'd die.

Here's a poem for you,
please make it all your own;
a little bit of happiness,
before this day has flown.

Re: Love is offered up...

Posted: Sun Aug 23, 2015 10:27 am
by Stella
Hi and welcome to our site David..

A lovely poem you have presented for us to enjoy and share its happiness.. thank you :D

Re: Love is offered up...

Posted: Tue Aug 25, 2015 3:23 am
by Cindy
This is a very enjoyable poem to read. The first and the last stanza make it feel like a personal gift. Very nice.

Re: Love is offered up...

Posted: Mon Aug 31, 2015 7:20 pm
by Joseph Anderson
Loved the gentle flowing cadence,great rhyme and the endearing thoughts engendered in a very precious poem. A joyful, uplifting read