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They say...

Posted: Mon Aug 24, 2015 7:23 pm
by drllrd74
They say, the past is done with,
the end of some old song;
that's tossed into the trash bin,
and now, does not belong.

They say, the past will bring you down,
it's better, left alone;
but there are things I can't forget,
some things I can't condone.

They say, it's buried in the brain,
down deeply in the mind;
let's forge on to tomorrow,
they're trying to be kind.

They say, that's it's all over,
it's just a memory;
but it's an image planted,
and I cannot break free.

They say, the past is final,
but my dead child still remains;
I still hurt inside that past,
and I cannot still the pains.

Re: They say...

Posted: Mon Aug 24, 2015 7:45 pm
by Stella
Oh my goodness David , you have my every sympathy if this is real....and how could "They" possibly know what your pain is like?

You have a lovely rhythm and wonderful rhyming scheme here, wonderful poetry my friend... :)

Re: They say...

Posted: Tue Aug 25, 2015 3:07 am
by Cindy
A very sad poem, but wonderfully written. Heartbreaking.

Re: They say...

Posted: Tue Aug 25, 2015 1:05 pm
by drllrd74
I lost my son at age five. A drowning. The sorrow never ends.

Re: They say...

Posted: Tue Aug 25, 2015 9:12 pm
by drllrd74
Thank you for your concern.