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Stella
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Safe Now

Postby Stella » Fri Aug 28, 2015 10:42 am

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Safe now
back in the arms of my solitude,
wrapped in my peaceful cloak

Where I can wander through my mind
and find the enchantment of you,
of your love and all our yesterdays

Where I can sense your shadow upon mine,
the gentle touch of you on my shoulder
with your sweet essence surrounding me

Safe now
In my own special solitude
wrapped in my beautiful cloak

Sharing my secrets with you once again
and welcoming the tears that fall,
tears of happiness in thoughts of you

knowing I can always find you here
and drift back through the channels
that I keep open in my memory

Safe now
In this beautiful solitude
wrapped in my contented cloak



©Stella Armour 2010-10-18
Revised 2014

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Re: Safe Now

Postby Karin Anderson » Sun Aug 30, 2015 7:07 am

It is interesting to see you revised this wonderfully sentimental write, and in doing so I love how you refer to your cloak on three occasions as peaceful, beautiful and contented. The picture complements your poem beautifully and it is such a pleasure to read Stella.


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