The smile

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Ratliff
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The smile

Postby Ratliff » Sun Aug 30, 2015 9:46 pm

Please check out my poetry books on Amazon "it's About Time" and "3420: Backyard conversations".
Check my books www.amazon.com/author/richardratliff

The smile

I set out to describe someone:
My ideal woman.
The sparkling blue hypnotic eyes
More than the oceans and the skies

Luminous hair; bright and vibrant
Framing her graceful fragrant neck.
And highlighting a wry cheshire smile
A resonant voice even when silent

Can't forget her breasts
Not distracting, just intriguing
Waist and hips softly seamless
Toned but soft to touch
And abundant legs of athletic proportion
With finely sculptured feet and ankles

Mind of engaging empathetic intellect
Expressive warm and giving arms and hands
A prima ballerina of emotions
Who has captivated me for all time

Copyright 2015
Richard l Ratliff
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Re: The smile

Postby Cindy » Sun Aug 30, 2015 10:52 pm

Out of all those wonderful attributes, the title ended up with the smile. That must be some smile. A lovely poem. :-)

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Re: The smile

Postby Stella » Mon Aug 31, 2015 9:19 am

She sounds perfect indeed , no wonder you are smiling you have found your Mona Lisa and Goddess of Love all in one lady.. :)

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Re: The smile

Postby Joseph Anderson » Mon Aug 31, 2015 6:24 pm

Rick-the girl of your dreams keeps popping up in my dreams. At my age, I just have to ignore them.A sweetly descriptive write,a joy to read

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Re: The smile

Postby Ratliff » Tue Sep 01, 2015 2:02 am

Joseph Anderson wrote:Rick-the girl of your dreams keeps popping up in my dreams. At my age, I just have to ignore them.A sweetly descriptive write,a joy to read

Joe, I wondered who she was seeing on the side
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Re: The smile

Postby Fay Slimm » Wed Sep 02, 2015 9:54 pm

Such a warm expressive description of a beautiful woman - - your pen paints the picture of love's captivation so well Rick.

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Re: The smile

Postby Ratliff » Thu Sep 03, 2015 12:08 am

Fay Slimm wrote:Such a warm expressive description of a beautiful woman - - your pen paints the picture of love's captivation so well Rick.
I'm reworking it some thought it was a little impersonal


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