Truly ~ a shadow sonnet

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Stella
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Truly ~ a shadow sonnet

Postby Stella » Thu Sep 03, 2015 8:15 pm

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You have a kindness I see it in you
blush, it comes gentle to my cheeks a blush
new wistful longing this feeling is new
“Hush“ says my heart, “Take your time now just hush”

Hurry I will not, there is no hurry
of heartbeats and the excitement thereof
worry does not suit, I shall not worry
love is my temptation I am in love

Moon holds our destiny, and sings the moon
sweet lullabies for star-kissed lovers sweet
soon my love you will hear her song, so soon
complete then we shall be, truly complete.

True love finds its mate my heart will be true
you have a kindness I see it in you.


© Stella Armour 27-01-15

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Karin Anderson
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Re: Truly ~ a shadow sonnet

Postby Karin Anderson » Fri Sep 04, 2015 4:50 am

Congratulations on composing a shadow sonnet Stella and I do not find them easy to craft. Yet, this has a beauty all of its own, where kindness, love and destiny are featured, and I love the picture you have chosen too!

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Re: Truly ~ a shadow sonnet

Postby Cindy » Mon Sep 07, 2015 1:08 pm

Very beautiful. Love the form.


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