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When you were in my arms...

Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2015 5:50 pm
by drllrd74
When you were in my arms,
the world just fell away;
thought that you'd be there,
for forever and a day.

When you touched my cheek,
my troubles ceased to be;
you took me to another place,
which no one else could see.

When you were in my arms,
I neglected all my plans;
to spend the time with you,
a fool for just your hands.

When you kissed my waiting lips,
then the world was lost to view;
traded for the pleasures,
that you and I once knew.

When you were in my arms,
then our souls were blended;
lovers to the finish line,
when your life was ended.

Re: When you were in my arms...

Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2015 6:31 pm
by Stella
David, you have such a gentle and romantic soul my friend.

This beautiful poem just like all the others i have read of yours is just full of love and compassion..thank you so much for sharing

Re: When you were in my arms...

Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2015 9:22 am
by Fay Slimm
So warm all through with a bitter-sweet ending - thank you David for sharing this wonderful love story.

Re: When you were in my arms...

Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2015 1:06 pm
by Seema Chowdhury
a tender write

Re: When you were in my arms...

Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2015 1:37 pm
by Cindy
Romantic with a touch of melancholy - always a good mixture. Nice.