Crimson.

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drllrd74
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Crimson.

Postby drllrd74 » Thu Jul 28, 2016 8:59 pm

Crimson, was the color of the dress you wore,
the night we danced out in the square;
the moon-glow on your face was love,
the breeze, it ruffled through your hair.

We danced, the way that lovers often do,
embraced, we swayed to music of our own;
and dreamed the way that lovers dream,
our fear of nervousness had surely flown.

You were my beauty, I was thus captured,
bright and lovely, delicate and fair;
we circled slowly in each others arms,
hints of scattered rain were in the air.

The aura of your eyes were shining lamps,
that gave assurance to my longing heart;
that there was a bond of love between us,
within which we were forming a new start.

Crimson, was the color of the dress you wore,
the night we danced out in the square;
and when the rain came gently falling down,
they were a pair of us... that did not care.

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Re: Crimson.

Postby Cindy » Thu Jul 28, 2016 9:21 pm

What a beautiful, heartfelt love story. I enjoyed your poem.

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Re: Crimson.

Postby zephyrwords » Sat Jul 30, 2016 11:20 am

Enchanting! You've painted the picture of an early love beautifully.
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Re: Crimson.

Postby Stella » Mon Oct 10, 2016 5:42 pm

i have a beautiful image of two lovers waltzing oblivious to the rest of the world.. just beautiful ♥


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