Half A World Away

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Karin Anderson
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Half A World Away

Postby Karin Anderson » Fri Nov 18, 2016 4:26 am

(A Synchronistic Poem)

It dowses dregs of winter days
rod’s divinity dips its lips
with mine.

It fishes deep in summer days
reel casts wild-yonder-blue sea spray
o’er me.

It rakes with gold in autumn days
leaves spiral, spin with hair cascades
of mine.

It aims the buds in ripe spring days
blossom’s stamen fires arrows straight
to me.

It dowses, fishes, rakes, and aims
the winter, summer, autumn, spring
o’er me.

In dead of night, in light of day
it sails beyond the seven seas
with me.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~

'It' is poetry’s images
where my rhapsodies ebb and flow
and yet.

My darling you’re at every port
although you’re half a world away
from me.

Karin Anderson © 2010

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Re: Half A World Away

Postby Stella » Sat Nov 19, 2016 9:48 pm

How beautiful Karin with some lovely alliteration. I could feel the love you portray coming through in each verse and the closing lines tell the story ..♥

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Re: Half A World Away

Postby Adette » Sun Nov 20, 2016 1:44 pm

Karin this was stunning you write the most beautiful poetry the flow wass perfect and the video added that little extra great to watch and what a great voice. You deserve more comments on your poetry appreciated for the joy you write.

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